Description-Draft Two
My Friendly Room-mate - Lucy
Hsiu-Lu Li, a friendly and outgoing girl, is my room-mate. I interviewed her this semester in writing class.
She lives with her family including parents, older sister, younger brother, and a pet dog whose name is Money in Tao Yuan. She has a part-time job every weekend. Therefore, she almost goes back to Tao Yuan every week. We live in the same room in the sixth dorm. She is a friendly and outgoing girl. She loves dogs and likes to entertain everybody. She always keeps a smile. It is easy to get along with her. She has various interests such as handicraft-making, face-painting, cooking, and hair style designing. She wants to be an English teacher in the future; in fact, she had many experiences in teaching children before.
Due to her personalities and interests, I am glad that Lucy is able to be an very good English teacher. I hope I can learn how to make up and how do design hair style from her. We have a lot in common such as going shopping in a department store and riding a motorcycle at a fast speed. I am glad that I can be her room-mate.
I enjoyed our time together. We always have a lot of fun. I can learn many interesting things from her.
Description-Draft One
Hsiu-Lu Li, a friendly and outgoing girl, is my room-mate. I interviewed her this semester in writing class.
She lives with her family including parents, older sister younger brother and a pet dog which name is Money in Tao Yuan. She has a part-time job every weekend, therefore, she almost go back to Tao Yuan every week. We live in the same room in the sixth dorm. She is a friendly and outgoing people, besides; she loves dogs and likes to entertain everybody. She always face people with a smile, therefore, it is easy to get along with this girl. She has some fashion and excellent interests, like handicraft, face-painting, cooking and hair style. She wants to be an English teacher in the future; in addition, she had many experiences in teaching children before.
According to her outgoing and interests, I am glad a person such as Lucy is planning to be an English teacher. She would make a very good teacher. I hope I can learn how to make up and do hair style from her. We have a lot in common, like going shopping in a department store and riding motorcycle at fast speed. I am glad that I can be her room-mate.
I enjoyed our time together. We always have a lot of fun. I can learn many interesting things from her.
Description-The outline
I. Main Idea
Who? Lucy Li Where? Academic Writing class When? this semester
II. Body
Basic background information
1. She lives with her parents in Tao Yuan, 21 years old, has a part-time job in every weekend
2. There are five people in her family, including parents, older sister and younger brother. And a pet-dog which name is Money.
3. She lives with me in the Sixth Dorm .
4. She is good at handicraft, face-painting, cooking and hair style.
5. She wants to be an English teacher in the future. She had many experiences in teaching children.
Personality
She is a friendly and outgoing girl. loves dogs.
She always face people with a smile. likes to entertain everybody.
It is easy to get along with this girl.
I am glad that I can be her room-mate.
III. Conclusion
I wish we can be a good friend. We have a good time when we live together. We always have a lot of fun.
Combine each group of short, choppy sentences into one sentence.
1. Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state, is divided into two regions which is a mountainous area inthe west and a desert basin in the north and east.
2. Disney World, an amusement park, located in Orlando Florida covers a large area of land including lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
3. Jamaica, the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite which is an ore which makes Aluminum.
4. Robert Ballard, an oceanographer, made headings in 1985 when he discovered the remains of the Titanic which was the "unsinkable" passenger ship which has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912 when it struck an iceberg.
5. William Shakespeare's father, John Shakespeare, was a glove maker and a town official who owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon which is a town about 75 miles onrthwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula is an ancient land which has been host to many prosperous civilizations including the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
How to make a sour spicy soup
Make delicious sour spicy soup has many easy steps. First, clean pork, elephant ears, black mushroom, to-fu, bamboo shoots, pig blood, carrot, green onion and shred them all. Next, put all materials into a pot. Add 8 cups of water and cook it for 10 minutes. Third, beat two eggs into the pot. Fourth, season with 2 tablespoon of soy, 1 1/2 tablespoon of vinegar, 1 tablespoon of sugar and 1/2 tablespoon of salt. Fifth, thicken the soup by corn starch solution. Finally, add 1/2 tablespoon of white sesame oil, 1/2 tablespoon of spicy-oil, some pepper, and 1 tablespoon of Chinese parsley. After that, the soup is ready to serve. Make delicious sour spicy soup is very easy, as long as you follow a few steps.
How a breakfast cereal is made
First, the wheat is harvested from the field. Then the wheat grain is transported to the silos. It is stored in the silos. Next, the grain is cooked to soften it. After this, it is cut and formed into thin strips. These are woven into biscuits. Then, each biscuit is baked until brown. Finally, it is packed ready to be eaten.
