Description-The outline
I. Main IdeaWho? Lucy Li Where? Academic Writing class When? this semester
II. Body
Basic background information
1. She lives with her parents in Tao Yuan, 21 years old, has a part-time job in every weekend
2. There are five people in her family, including parents, older sister and younger brother. And a pet-dog which name is Money.
3. She lives with me in the Sixth Dorm .
4. She is good at handicraft, face-painting, cooking and hair style.
5. She wants to be an English teacher in the future. She had many experiences in teaching children.
Personality
She is a friendly and outgoing girl. loves dogs.
She always face people with a smile. likes to entertain everybody.
It is easy to get along with this girl.
I am glad that I can be her room-mate.
III. Conclusion
I wish we can be a good friend. We have a good time when we live together. We always have a lot of fun.
posted by 思涵 @ 11:56 PM
3 Comments:
First of all, I'm glad to be your interviewee. And there are some opinions of mine.
When you are trying to write the draft, I'm 21 years old.
She lives in Sixth dorm.-->"the" Sixth dorm.
loves dog-->loves dogs, I think it should be more than one dog.
like to entertain everybody-->like"s" to entertain everybody.
That's all my opinion about your outline. Hope we can have an good article after you finish it.
I think your content is good.
OK. I like the comments your partners offered. You can go ahead to write your essay. Good luck.
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