Description-Draft One
Hsiu-Lu Li, a friendly and outgoing girl, is my room-mate. I interviewed her this semester in writing class.She lives with her family including parents, older sister younger brother and a pet dog which name is Money in Tao Yuan. She has a part-time job every weekend, therefore, she almost go back to Tao Yuan every week. We live in the same room in the sixth dorm. She is a friendly and outgoing people, besides; she loves dogs and likes to entertain everybody. She always face people with a smile, therefore, it is easy to get along with this girl. She has some fashion and excellent interests, like handicraft, face-painting, cooking and hair style. She wants to be an English teacher in the future; in addition, she had many experiences in teaching children before.
According to her outgoing and interests, I am glad a person such as Lucy is planning to be an English teacher. She would make a very good teacher. I hope I can learn how to make up and do hair style from her. We have a lot in common, like going shopping in a department store and riding motorcycle at fast speed. I am glad that I can be her room-mate.
I enjoyed our time together. We always have a lot of fun. I can learn many interesting things from her.
posted by 思涵 @ 12:18 AM
2 Comments:
I think your Draft 1 is very interesting. I have known more about Lucy.
Thank you for writing me as a perfect person, is that really me? (just kidding)
Maybe the last paragraph should be longer.
You sure did a great job.
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